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Old 06-24-2009, 06:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
Enigma's List Of Poems.

Alright, racking up more points, this tab intrested me the most. I got a few poems, enjoy them, comment them if you like them, or tell me how bad they are, i don't give two nor three (censor)

Never Over
Too Long..
We've said..
thats it's alright, and it's okay.
But how long?
Tell we break..?
Secretly Shatter and Fade within?
Don't Ignore This Poiseness Pain
I'll hold you, as long as you hold me.
Cause it's..

Never Over, No! Never over,
It's never over. To Make a smile

Moments
It's in these very moments.
That we act and not hide.
here is your options.
Tell me what you decide.
Cause you only have one shot
to see whats infront of you
Only have once chance.
to see what one can do.

Oh and it's in these very moments
where i can hold my breath.
These very moments
Where i seem so less dead.

I say no more running!
No more words go on unsaid!
No more closing!
Open you to your hearts Content!
Oh and it's in these very moments,
where we see it threw the end.

Acidic Rain (This poem has male/female parts.)
(Girl Part) - Standing Alone....in this acidic rain...

feeling so cold...and with internal pain..

to touch my lips and feel them dry....

To Never have a single tear,,,fall down my eyes..

......why would you say those 3 words of death?

and now...i never want to hear them again...

just leave me alone...in this acidic rain....-


(Guy Part)- You Stand In The Shadows Of The Acidic Rain...

pains to me to see you in such horrible vain...

your eyes full of hatred, your soul bearly together...

pains me to see your beautiful heart begin to wither...

...walking over to you as you back away, i stop and say,"Please Do Not Be Afriad, I'll Just Close Me Eyes, And We'll Be Together In This Acidic Rain..."


The Beauty Of The Night
The Beauty Of Darkness

The World Lost Of Light

The Most Beautiful Moments, resin in the night

And There you are...

hidden in the shadows

tears streaming down.

your soul full of sorrow

your pain blinds you

from the true love infront of you

please just open your eyes

and say yes

to a new life

and well both injoy the pure essence of the night

and as we stand in the enternal darkness

our hearts become one

and our love turns into a lantern

this may be..

just a dream...

A Sincerere Wish That May Never Become Realility

for there you are still hurt, still crying

and here i am

a distance from you

for once i shake in fear

yet i come to you

and wipe your tears, embrace you deeply..

open my lips and say

"It's okey, i understand your fear and pain, just let the rain take your place"

And there you are, shocks and in disbealife

you begin to restore your self

Piece by Piece.

And Now A Smile Is On Your Face,

The Beauty Of Night..

Soon Turns To The Light Of Day..


Breathing (New Poem/Song)
Inside Places
Outside Walls
Mistaken Races
Right Along Wrong
Can I Fix This,
The Task Is In Which I Saught
But Giving Up Now, oh No.
Is Not My Option One.

So Breathe Me In
As Breathe Me Out
Take Your Time
I'll Be The Distent Line
Lettting Lose
To Closured Eyes.
Inhaling The Moment
And Exhaling It Good-Bye.
So No More Sorrow
Sleep Well Tonight

Frozen Moments
And Heated Times
Crying Paintings
And The Poisoned Mind
Break Them Apart,
Throw Them aside
Pieces Broken
But To Me It's A Design.

So Take Me in
Don't Kick Me Out
I'll Take No Time
To Make This Right.
Letting Lose
And Closured Eyes
Inhaling The Moment
And Exhaling It Goodbye
So No More Pieces
I'll Hold Them in Tight.

So No More Sorrow
No More Cries
Inhale This Moment
And Breath It Out Tonight.
Cause There Nothing To Fear
I Swear It By
Each Sweet Moment
That Unfolded In Our Lives.
So Breathe In Slowly
Exhale It Right
I'll Be Your Drug,
I Swear I'll Be Tonight

so more sorrow
no more cries
no more fears
no hidden lies
i'll be right here,
along your side
so inhale me deeply
and exhale me tonight.

Last edited by Enigma; 07-27-2009 at 02:14 AM. Reason: New Poem!
 
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Old 06-29-2009, 12:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
Re: Enigma's List Of Poems.

Hey, these are really good. I'm a writer myself, and I love poetry. <3
 
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Old 07-17-2009, 07:54 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I really like it. <3

My favorit: Never Over )
 
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